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Feo - story update

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Story update at the end, doesn't affect the general storyline, only adding some information.

Feothan: breeze
Feo: Fire, ugly

suggested music: Angels And Demons OST - Fire

Amy made great progress through the deep snow and Anna marveled once again at the sensible stallion who did so willingly everything she demanded. He wasn't the dumb hyperactive toy that she thought, in fact he had some nice well balanced gaites. No wonder he was currently trained for the riding school.
Finally she found a trace that cut the deep snowbank before her in half. The Thoroughbred snorted, nostrils flaring, inhaling deeply, looking around nervously. Shortly Anna smelled something like the scent of a fireplace, but it was gone suddenly. Now she realized how empty and quiet the light forrest was, nothing was moving, not even a slight breeze. Pressing her barefooted feet against the horses belly, she urged Amy to walk on and to follow the trace of Lyo's horse. It was still grave silence around them, that made her feel like she was surrounded by glass walls, that let no sound enter or pass.

It was Amy who saw Sex first, cantering between the trees crossing a small clearing. Anna clicked her tongue and Aim For My Heart changed his pace into his extensive gallop, approaching the Rider in front of them. Anna thought what she would tell him, or if he wanted to see her at all. She had behaved like a wounded animal and had been blind to his own feelings. Charly was right, Anna couldn't change the fate of DLS by breaking Lyo's heart. If there was nothing she could say, she would say this one thing.


The stallion saw the mare and the rider. He recognized the two. A rush of fear went through his body and something his rider left inside of his mind... a helpless anger. He remembered them well. It was them that caused his rider to vanish. He was alone, because they took his master away from him. Anxiously hiding behind thick evergreen bushes, he observed them. Hoping they would go away soon, taking the fear with them. A cracking sound of twiggs grabbed his attention, it was the girl he liked so much. But what did she do?
No, NO it screamed inside of his head, don't let them see you, they are dangerous, get away, GET AWAY FROM THEM.
But it was too late. The rider turned around and started moving towards the girl. The stallion felt helpless. What could he do... How could he save her from the fate that his master suffered?
He jumped out of his hiding place, right onto the middle of the clearing, between them. The mare was startled, he sensed her fear, which she seemed to fight down for her rider. How cruel the world was. She still had her rider, but they had taken away his. He wouldn't let them take away the girl to!


Aim For My Heart knew Feothan well. He realized that Feothan was anxious and terrified of the rider in front of them, signaling him to reatreat to a safer place, but the woman on his back refused, she spoke to them, trying to sooth their panic, but they couldn't help it. This rider was bad, he changed everything... Amy reared up, as Feothan urged him to move backwards. Flames licked across his leg and face, there was only one way to escape. If Anna wasn't seeing the danger, he couldn't help it.

Sex spun around and an enourmous heat laid on her fur, she thought that she would be on fire every moment, though they were still some meters away from that creature. Her master directed her to stride forward, circling around the beast in safe distance, like a torrero around a bull. The fire tried to keep them away from the woman on the brown horse. She saw the fear of Amy and was confused. The fear was directed towards her. The beast seemed to defend the other against Lyo and her. That made absolutely no sense.... She closed her eyes as Lyo turned their front right towards the burning stallion. Finally the rider of Amy lost her seat on the horse and fell down to the ground. The thoroughbred turned around and galloped back to the alley.

Anna couldn't believe it. It seemed she was falling in slow motion, though it couldn't be more than seconds. Silly thoughts rushed through her mind. What kind of soap opera had her life become? It would be a really stupid way to die now. Oh no, the only stone within three meters. Then the lights went out for her.

Feothan screamed at the sight of the woman, who lay in the snow. Not moving. That couldn't be, he did his best to save her. He defended her, but still he lost her. He stood next to her looking confused, then he just started walking, leaving the scene of his defeat behind.

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faint... I'm done for today... don't like the faces of Lyo and Anna, but I love Feothan ;)


Status Updates:
Aim For My Heart - breeding closed due medical care
Feothan - breeding and events closed due to general condition of the horse (half starved, traumatized)




Lyo and Sex With My Ex by :iconabosz007:
Anna and Aim For My Heart by me
Feothan's first design by :iconkalmakoira:
Feothan owned by me

Brush: Flames by :iconmidnightstouch:

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AppyNinja's avatar
WoW..das Bild sied sooo toll aus..:love:
Tolle arbeit..^^